Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Choice is a freedom which every person possesses. It is widely claimed that there are numerous options to choose from. This trend is an advantage as we can choose from a wide range of options but it can cause confusion.
On the one hand, when a human being is given an umpteen number of choices, their mind will be in a state of perplexity which may lead to chaos. They will not have a proper objective to select what they intended to get and end up with something which is useless. To illustrate this, a research study conducted by the "University of Wales" in the United Kingdom shows that the 90% of humans will be baffled when the number of choices increases.
On the other hand, variety should be an attribute of buying an excellent product. If we have a wide range of options, we will be able to choose what is best for us. For example, buying a mobile phone can be a tedious job, but when we are provided with different options according to its specifications, the task becomes easier and productive. In addition to this, different choices in career path have proliferated over the years, which facilitates the students to choose what they intend to pursue. In a recent survey conducted by the "Times Now" magazine shows that the number of career choices multiplied from 2000 to 2010 and it proves its efficiency at 90% of the students are satisfied with it.
In conclusions, variety of choices can be beneficial as it gives the feasibility to select what we want. Despite this, it can also cause confusion which can lead to chaos
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68115942029 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71796853773 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7400342372 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995736414226 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393736496087 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429689950077 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587351242603 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309061027062 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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