some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that many people think that government should help people to choose a suitable university education which does not depend on their financial background. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this view.
On the one hand, the budget of government still faces a lot of different problems. First of all, as far as a poor financial background is concerned, allocating resources on education is hard to do. If they provide a free education, they will only support basic school facilities without professional teacher teams who play an important role in advancing the education. secondly, in some nations, poverty and hunger problems are in higher priorities. In Africa, for example, poverty rate, although it tends to decrease in some recent years, but it is still a big number. spending on meeting their basic needs accounts for the highest government’s budget.
On top of that, there are some reasons why education should not be provided free of charge. Firstly, many families do not want a free education. For example, rich families gravitate toward spending a big expenditure on equipment as well as experienced teachers to reach a better education. secondly, instead of making university education free, government should provide it as scholarships for students who have difficult conditions or are good at any aspects of life. In my country, for instance, government gives foreign scholarships yearly for the best students to gain knowledge from other nations and then, they turn back to contribute on development of my country.
In conclusion, with many issues, I completely disagree with the idea is that government is responsible for making university education free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99126299763 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0709302299 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252615429628 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824469777302 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666877465637 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162234912759 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525208550672 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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