Some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. Others think that this information should be protected.
It is a common belief that the personal information of violent criminals should be protected. However, there is a more persuasive argument that this information should be made available to the public to protect the community.
On the one hand, protecting the personal information of violent criminals is necessary in order not to victimize innocent people. This is because, when a family member is a criminal, it affects the reputation and shame of that family. Research has shown that, after the information is made public, the rest of the members may be shunned by a part of the people. When you go to school, you are isolated by your friends and when you graduate, it can be difficult to find a job and not be treated fairly. We can easily see when this happens in our life and in some movies.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. This will contribute to protect our community, help people have a deeper look at people and a more comfortable mentality. For instance, no one can guarantee that a prison break will not happen at all. Publicizing information about criminals will not only help people raise vigilance, ensure safety but also make it easier for the police to find and arrest them before they harm innocent people.
To sum up, while it is apparent that the personal information of violent criminals should be protected, it is undeniable that the benefits of publicizing violent criminals’ information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96456692913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85975590854 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2494252828 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.550901129201 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220215681394 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180661590177 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39139910873 0.151304729494 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136015987868 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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