Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, individuals tend to live with a hectic schedule, making them overwhelmed by endless deadlines. Therefore, some people hold a belief that there is no point in planning for the future while they can invest more time in the present. From the vantage point, I would argue that future plans are also beneficial to personal development and we should combine two methods for a better living.
To commence, putting efforts to achieve goals in the present is really essential for dwellers in many ways. In fact, there is a growing number of people who have a bad habit of putting things off. It is undeniable that planning and taking actions are two different definitions, so that instead of investing time in making a list to do and doing nothing in the end, we should face up to the challenges as soon as possible. It will boost our confidence for upcoming obstacles as well as help us learn relevant experience and knowledge from mistakes.
On the other hand, future plans actually play an important role in becoming a better version of oneself. Each individual has one or several responsibilities in daily life, thus planning list-to-do jobs helps us to control our time and effort by prioritizing and reminding actions to execute. Besides, making plans for the future means we are the only ones who lead our life and no one else can define our limitations. Therefore, this method might turn a passive person into an active one, which contributes to the holistic performance.
In conclusion, while I approve of the idea of focusing more on the present, planning for the future is not a waste of time as it offers numerous merits to people after all. Applying both of the approaches will not only help us improve ourselves but also provide us with the means to push the boundaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, after all, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78778135048 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69594925563 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3695691771 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264052134985 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906502529619 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997310130391 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161683485649 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460377291217 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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