Since the peak in industrialization, humans have become insensitive about protecting the environment. For healthy life of all species, both in present and future, it is quite essential to preserve our natural environment; but the irony is, almost no one is bothered about it and comes forward to mitigate this critical issue. In my opinion, understanding the probable reasons of this phenomenon is important, which may lead us to some applicable solutions in favor of environmental conservation.
Although some environment warriors are spreading awareness on war footing to protect the earth, they have not achieved considerable positive outcome. Reason being, majority of people have become self centered which leads to materialistic life, causing detrimental effects on the environment. For instance, even though plastic bags are banned by the government of India, people use polybags for general purpose and throw it away later. Consequently, landfill sites are not only flooded with plastic waste, but also this accumulated plastic scrap leads to plastic pollution and soil contamination.
As far as effective measures are concerned, first of all, the government should arrange awareness programs regarding adverse effects of modern lifestyle and corrective actions which people can adopt to ameliorate the environment. Secondly, strict laws and heavy penalty should be imposed against usage of plastic for both customer and manufacturer. Moreover, people should opt public transportation more and more rather than using private cars. Lastly, instead of using bio-mass fuels, industries should be instructed to use renewable energy sources which will reduce toxic gases carbon emission level. Implementation of all these elements could lead to less pollution and preservation of natural environment.
In summary, modern lifestyle and rampant industrialization are prime culprit for degradation of the environment. However, better late than never, both governments and citizens can change this negative trend by acting wisely to preserve the natural environment for better and healthy future life. As such it is predicted that, if all corrective actions aforementioned are followed, then our planet will be again clean and green.
- It is observed that communication between family members in today s time is less as compared to the past However some people do not think so Do you agree or disagree 93
- Today children are spending much more time watching TV compared to the past Why do you think this happens Is this a positive or a negative change 90
- Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military Others think that women are less suitable for this kind of job Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial However most make no effort to do so Why do you think this is happening What are some simple actions that could help the environment 89
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...and corrective actions which people can adopt to ameliorate the environment. Secondly, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in summary, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74924471299 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10137584661 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63746223565 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3189804321 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.866666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113495837622 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363206592322 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362111622239 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692832705995 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130667744979 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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