SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT PROFESSIONALS SUCH AS DOCTORS ENGINEERS SHOULD BE REQUIRE TO WORK IN THEIR COUNTRY WHERE THEY DID THEIR TRANIING. OTHERS BELIVE THEY SHOULD BE FREE TO WORK IN ANOTHER COUNTRY IF THEY WISH DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION
It is argued that professionals, like doctors and engineers should work in the country where they graduated. While some people think that everyone should have their own freedom to work where they want. In my opinion people should work where they wish. Working in a country where they did their training helps in the development of the country. But working where an individual wants to work helps individual to have more opportunities.
On one hand some people believe that one should be free to work in another country. By working in another country provide enough opportunities for a person. An individual can reach his goal. Where ever we find a better chance we should grab it. Pursuing career in different nations helps individual development. Working in various territory a person expose to different nature by which knowledge about various things can be gained. In a recent survey done by "Times of India" it is estimated that over 60% of people wanted to work in different areas.
On other hand some people think that white-collar job holders should work in the nation where they acquired their skills so that the country will be developed. Working in own country increases the rate of economy. By moving to other places for better opportunities the incapable people will get chance. By this the nation will be undeveloped.
In conclusion, although moving to other countries causes regression of the nation. I believe by working in another country helps in reaching the top level and invention of new things.
- many manfactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar do you agree or disagree 73
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT PROFESSIONALS SUCH AS DOCTORS ENGINEERS SHOULD BE REQUIRE TO WORK IN THEIR COUNTRY WHERE THEY DID THEIR TRANIING OTHERS BELIVE THEY SHOULD BE FREE TO WORK IN ANOTHER COUNTRY IF THEY WISH DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINIO 67
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise thst their products are new in some ways why is this do u think it is a positive or negative development 78
- the chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and 2018 summarize the information by selecting main features and make comparisions
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rk in the country where they graduated. While some people think that everyone should ...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rson. An individual can reach his goal. Where ever we find a better chance we should ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06719367589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72225579687 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501976284585 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6458508583 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0555555556 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482554187181 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159933753181 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125548136476 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286037244877 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113731391068 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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