There is a belief that professional jobs should develop their careers at the country where they have been learnt while other support the opposite trend which is allowing them to work worldwide following their choices. In my opinion, people should be allowed to work anywhere as their wish is better option for everyone.
The idea that professionals should be required work for their countries of education have been believed by a number of people. Firstly, most of educating facilities were supported and granted by the government of the country that is use the tax of this resident. As a result, working at the training location tend to be a way to paid back for this. Secondly, after becoming well equipped with necessary skills and knowledge to begin their careers, these students are expected to use these as a tiny part for the development of the region.
However, I think that restricting people to work in another location could goes against the freedom and also decrease the chances they contribute for the future. People should have free choices by themselves for the working place. Failing to achieve this leads to the breach of freedom right which was described in most country’s law and also bring the decline to the employee’s emotions and their productivity throughout their lives. Besides that, a number of people have showed that they still dedicate for the training country by foreign culture, experience and knowledge while living and get a successful career in the other places.
In conclusion, it is true that high skilled worker should have the responsibility of developing the country support their study. In contrast, I believed that their wish for working location is worthy to be respect. Thus, the choice should be up to individual so that they can comfortably contribute to society.
- The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 56
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 67
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
...the country where they have been learnt while other support the opposite trend which ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...eople to work in another location could goes against the freedom and also decrease t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can comfortably contribute to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68613518316 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543333333333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6826616025 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403324483701 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152378503893 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781497480957 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265750350147 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399280637907 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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