In the reality of brain drain nowadays, more and more qualified doctors and engineers desire to join the foreign work force. As a result, This tendency has raise an issue that lacking of high quality labors for a specific nation. Many people think that these high glory majors should retain graduates in the nation where they are trained while the others support the idea that individuals have the right to work freely any where they wish. In my opinion, I am convinced by both statements for some reasons.
On the one hand, the training programs and tuition fee of medical doctors and engineers differ widely among nations, so the quality of graduates are also different. This is largely due to the fact that the education curriculum in a particular country sets the aim for graduated doctors and engineers differently compared to the same majors in a foreign country. For example, the medical doctor training program in Vietnam is 6 years and 12 months of apprenticeship to acquire the skills and a certificate needed for treatments and applying in a hospital. While the time for training time for those who pursue medicine in America is around 8 years making the quality of medical doctors in 2 nations totally different.
On the other hand, a qualified person who has adequate skills and knowledge and has undergone national professional tests or exams should be provide the opportunity to work anywhere they want. This is because a high quality labor meet the need of the labor workforce in foreign nations and they do bring more value to a foreign organization than in other domestic organizations. For instance, students who complete university and get an excellent degree can earn scholarships to study higher education in America or Australia and then they become a part of its workforce.
In conclusion, I consider both ideas have pros and cons. While many nations have different training program and quality, graduates who achieve specific degrees or have sufficient skills and knowledge should be provided chances to work abroad.
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports Why is it a positive or negative development 84
- Some educationalists argue that non exam art based subjects such as music drama art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent do you 89
- Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem To what extent do you agree whit this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledg 89
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05014749263 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69541632868 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5329667282 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239809959329 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812352199288 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770571548618 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146634884929 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622546396279 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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