Education is momentous for every individual and it should be possessed by each person. According to few masses, education should help for the betterment of society however, rest of the people reckon it should be used in order to fulfil own aspirations. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will not only discuss both views but also give my opinion.
To initiate with the first view and my opinion, if every folk in society would be well qualified then only living areas could be upgraded. To exemplify, instead of involving themselves in antisocial activities, youngsters will have their desired jobs which will keep them busy in their work then consequently crime rate in society will be dropped off. Moving further, individuals will be more innovative which will help them to intensify more technological as well as contemporary things in the living areas. Thus, societies could be benefited with the help of knowledge.
On the contrary, education should be used to fulfil own dreams as it helps one to have a strong financial status through which one can afford every luxurious thing. Further more, one can raise his or her offsprings in good aura and can get admitted their children in reputed schools or universities with the help of education.
It can be concluded that education is like a magic stick which could eradicate all the hurdles faced by an individual in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... be possessed by each person. According to few masses, education should help for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01304347826 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76362067655 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0475318689 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300344354797 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128640219749 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693235849665 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184823945922 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111807535788 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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