Healthy diet is momentous for every individual living on earth in order to do his work more effectively and efficiently. Few masses do not eat meat or fish because according to them, it is not better for their health however, advantageous for world. I will not only discuss this issue but also give my opinion in forthcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with my opinion, rich amount of protein in our food is offered by meat or fish due to which it is beneficial for folks’ health as protein will help them to have more power and energy in their body to do work. However, vegetarian food has less carbohydrates or proteins as comparative to non-vegetarian food. In addition to this, selling of fish or meat generates more employment opportunities for folks which will eradicate the hurdle of unemployment from country. For instance, fish markets in Bombay, India are running at high peaks.
In contrast, sometimes animals are infected by noxious diseases which can pave the way to detrimental impact on person’s body such as bird flu or any virus. Furthermore, about quarter of economy of most of the nations run on import and export of meat so it is advantages for whole world. To exemplify, authorities of Delhi, India exports large amount of beef to western countries.
It can be concluded that although animals are lucrative for us yet checkup of them should be done so that illness inside them could not harm human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun carbohydrates is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... to do work However vegetarian food has less carbohydrates or proteins as comparativ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve to nonvegetarian food In addition to this selling of fish or meat generates more ...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...y India are running at high peaks In contrast sometimes animals are infected by noxio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7868852459 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68347186139 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 244.0 20.2975951904 1202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1168.0 106.682146367 1095% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 244.0 20.7667163134 1175% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 7.06120827912 1246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183736994314 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183736994314 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103447855287 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782364455413 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 123.1 13.0946893788 940% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -167.72 50.2224549098 -334% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.3 11.3001002004 861% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.69 8.58950901804 229% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 99.6 10.1190380762 984% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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