Some People believe that the radio is the best way to get news, while others believe that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
News is information about current events. While some people believe that receive news from the radio is the best way, I agree with those who think that television is much better for getting the news.
On the one hand, it is believed that radio provides a lot of advantages to the people who get news from it. First and foremost, with aid of radio, we can easily get news from any where as nowadays in this technological world, many mobile companies provide radio in their mobiles, so people can easily start it and get news from it. As a result, they may able to save their time as they do not have to sit in front of television screen. Cost effectiveness is another reason that can be considered. For instance, in many countries, television new channels cost is very high as compared to almost free cost of the radio, so while listening news from the radio people can also save their money.
However, I think that television is the best for getting news. Firstly,televisions news channels devote visuals of particular incidence to the people.Consequently, people might easily understand the information which given by news channels, which ultimately meritorious for the people.Moreover, in today's era, radio network is not available every where especially in rural areas, small towns and mountains area, so these places television play an indispensable role for the people to get news as these places people may not able to get news from the radio.
To conclude, although radio is cheaper as compared to television, people not only comprehend news easily but also get news anywhere with the help of television news channels.Therefore, I believe that TV is the best way to get news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93706293706 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98684091332 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.621483169 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.2 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334463459861 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156569986899 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118663564762 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257354948628 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716329436396 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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