Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both view and give your own opinion

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both view and give your own opinion

Plenty of schools nowadays often give homework to their students and there has been an argument on whether teachers should assign homework them or not. I personally believe that the two views are not completely wrong, and the following essay takes an insight at both sides of the argument.
Giving homework after school is useful for students to review the lessons that they have learnt at schools. Some students who are prone to indolence or forgetful will have the opportunity to revise and memorise the knowledge better. After that, the teachers can check the accuracy and make sure that the pupils recognise and take notes their mistakes. Moreover, it helps the students easily understand the next lessons if it involves with the prior session.
However, giving homework is not the best way to remind pupils to remind of their previous lessons. Students have to finish their homework before going to school. Therefore, they do not have enough time to play sport, take activities or join clubs at school. This can make students become drained and not be able to save enough energy for the next day. Moreover, students will get stressed and feel bored when going to school. Just as some Asians countries like Japan, Korea and China, it can be seen that all pupils are trying their best for their future. They are not educated sufficiently about the necessary soft skills such as communication, negotiation, and team-work. Thus, they are seemingly passive and in the state of energy lacking.
To sum up, homework for student, regardless of anything, still results in controversies amongst both views and an ideal solution is to go with one that suits the students’ learning habits.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01423487544 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48693601629 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.238417386 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224477897587 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739324705692 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641164033187 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145893721371 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649407007202 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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