Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Some people opine that, giving homework to children after their schooling schedule is highly effective in enhancing their education skills . However, others thing it is unnecessary and should be avoided by institutions. To create any conclusion its all important aspects must be discussed and understand its pros and cons before making any statement.
First of all, Assigning any work related to studies by teacher is an an afford to upgrade knowledge of student in a particular subject. In addition, such kind of activity can keep children busy throughout the day. As a result, children can easily consentrate on their studies.
Moreover, homework works as a link between students and studies. Children can remind what they have learnt in todays class. Otherwise TV , video games and other sports can definitely distract them from the school. Furthermore, it not possible for any teacher to complete whole syllabus at school. Therefore, many teachers opt the way of homework to tackle the burden to syllabus and create connection between children and their studies.
On the other hand, few people claim that, it is against the children's basic rights of playing after completing heavy schedule of schooling. They suggest, education is good but children should also be active in sport and physical activities. Both mental as well as physical growth is equally crucial in perspective of human body. Another factor that need to be considered is burden of studies on small aged children. All these things are must be addressed by education department so that everyone feel free while learning at school.
Hammering the last nail, it can be said that, "To each his own". I believe, learning should be stress free to children. Homework and other activity must be given but in a limited amount so that children can easily manage studies and playing sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21262458472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6682550901 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6347105011 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5789473684 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386375167665 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106122289044 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644766848822 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203844239578 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493335225945 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.