Many people argue that physical schools are no longer necessary as the internet enables children to learn at home because of its abundance of easily accessible information related to various subjects. While it is convenient for children to learn online at home, I could contend that conventional schools are still essential since they offer more comprehensive learning environments for students.
The online learning environment may, on the one hand, be much more convenient for its learners. This is because the internet enables learners to access a vast amount of information related to their learning needs whenever and wherever they are. With an internet-connected laptop or smartphone, for example, online learners can search for their learning materials anytime and wherever they desire. On the contrary, those attending traditional education have to find out their learning requirements through mainly textbooks or books in the library, which would be time-consuming and exhausting.
Despite the above mentioned, I still believe that schools are essential for education because of their more comprehensive teaching methods. Firstly, traditional schools are more reliable. Schools are required to offer a standardized curriculum that is thoroughly reviewed by the headmaster in terms of its contents, types of lectures, and textbooks. This helps students protect themselves from misleading learning materials, which are frequently rife on the internet. Moreover, children attending formal schooling are taught invaluable moral lessons such as politeness, honesty and respect for older people. Without education, children cannot develop both wisdom and morality comprehensively.
In conclusion, although the internet offers students its flexible learning environment, I believe that schools are still a significant necessity due to their more effective teaching methodologies. In the future, I hope that learners will appreciate the value of proper education instead of focusing on the internet.
- The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16 25 in a particular country who participated in sports compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000 89
- The graph shows the percentage of adolescents following a vegerarian diet. 73
- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motobikes To what extend do you agree or disagree 84
- The following chart show the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to housing preferences of UK people 78
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88356164384 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12455663959 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7906695823 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169590437983 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603227486319 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593386937136 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111876165883 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476873279138 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.