It is commonly acceptable that the development of society cannot be separated by scientific researches. Many edge-cutting technologies are carried out by a private company serving as a commercial function; therefore, many people argued that those researches should be planned and limited by government in order to exert a better use. Personally, I completely agree this statement.
On the one hand, scientific activities are more likely to success if they proposed by government, due to the plenty public resources and more suitable policy that can be approached by scientists. As consequence, the price of the final products might be more approachable to the public. For example, many necessary medicine researches such as vaccines are carried by governments or cooperated by different countries and it is definitely of benefit to humans.
On the other hand, the quality of scientific researches and its results can be granted under the control of government. It is more common recently that in order to obtain the largest economic profits, many companies reduce the costs of scientific researches, ignoring the serious consequence to the customers. Moreover, some private companies which lack the sense of responsibility, deliberately conduct wrong scientific process to promote their existing products.
Admittedly, scientific progresses might also benefit from excellent private companies which possess adequate capital and a nice social reputation. After all, it may be not restricted by government policies and might become more innovative with the support of potential profits. But it still needs some necessary regulations to prevent those researches from any accidents.
In conclusion, scientific researches that carried by private companies, with sufficient funds, can be successful and beneficial. While, as far as I am concerned, more benefits than problems will surface when they are carried by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67586206897 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15041095407 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8338356668 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202469607021 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678712968036 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490603112996 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116083441921 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438092401198 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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