Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful
career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, the question of whether students should have access to university or get a job after school has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although going to work early seems to be attractive, the downsides will be far more significant and the option to continue schooling will be better in the long term.
To some people, the option to start work straight after school is beneficial for several reasons. Firstly, high school students who opt to become workers after graduation could have more experience and practical knowledge in their fields. In fact, they may have opportunities to expose to different situations at workplaces than those who spend years to enter higher education. As a result, they gain more practical understanding and move up their ladders fast. Secondly, young workers could master a whole host of soft skills, such as self-management, since they start to find a job on their owns from a very young age. These skills make it easier for them to pursue a better future.
On the other hand, enter universities or colleges could be more beneficial for youngsters to have a successful career. The first reason is that many recruiters in some fields tend to favor those who have high-level certificates over who do not due to certain job characteristics. For instance, several jobs which require certain academic knowledge, such as doctor or scientists, may prefer higher education diplomas in candidates/ resumes. Furthermore, many students choose to attend tertiary education nowadays, and this makes it more challenging for early workers to survive in such a competitive job market. Consequently, either they could not get a promotion in jobs or they may live with low-paid works.
In conclusion, it seems to me that studying at university or college is not always the best route to a successful career, but it is better than getting a job straight after school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent years, the question of whether students should have access to universi...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...e who have high-level certificates over who do not due to certain job characteristi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06031746032 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89195023562 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5114956955 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217182587704 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811298691088 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109677071402 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184839882667 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149829627808 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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