Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The important if youngsters contribute in to social works without any pay which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is Beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influences of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years.In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind this is that teenagers can contribute in society for numerous unpaid community work. They can spread the knowledge about a lot of legal issues of individual to society. For example, they can make awareness about education to those person, who think that it is not too virtual. Thus, it will help them to enhance their personality and confidence. Another striking benefits in this regard is that only youth has opportunities to contributes in economic growth by their possible efforts. Categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that nowadays there are several issues that needs to highlight but none of anyone speak on them. So only youth can do this because they are the future of a economy.
Probing ahead, one of main reason stem from the fact is that teenagers are surviving under that age where they have to complete their own visions and goals which required lots of time. Thus if they do work for social purpose then they may distract from their actual prospects. Moving further it is pertinent to mention that in the mid age of life everyone want success but if individuals do unpaid social works then it may effect to their self satisfaction. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are against of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of unpaid social works by teenagers are too great to be ignored.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...er the potential impact in recent years.In my opinion the former proposition appea...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...y can make awareness about education to those person, who think that it is not too virtual. ...
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Line 3, column 807, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... do this because they are the future of a economy. Probing ahead, one of main ...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... and goals which required lots of time. Thus if they do work for social purpose then...
^^^^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...uals do unpaid social works then it may effect to their self satisfaction. Apart from ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03735632184 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69684635239 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9602195717 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261731046749 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824030596918 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522522134523 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154486014897 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475452917812 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...er the potential impact in recent years.In my opinion the former proposition appea...
^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...y can make awareness about education to those person, who think that it is not too virtual. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 807, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... do this because they are the future of a economy. Probing ahead, one of main ...
^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... and goals which required lots of time. Thus if they do work for social purpose then...
^^^^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...uals do unpaid social works then it may effect to their self satisfaction. Apart from ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03735632184 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69684635239 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9602195717 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261731046749 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824030596918 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522522134523 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154486014897 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475452917812 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.