Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary.
Do you agree or disagree?
Education upgrades the thinking of society and helps to uproot social evils. A couple of individuals claim that internet provides a best source of information so, there is no more need of libraries. I am partially agree with the aforementioned statement and will explain my views in the forthcoming paragraph.
To commence with, the reasons why most of the community like to ingres knowledge with the help of online sites first and foremost reason is that, it is extremely easy along with cheap. To elaborate, due to the advancement of technology there are various type of opportunities are available, which helps students a lot in their academics, they can gain knowledge about their subjects and they do not need pay for it as this is unpaid facility. There is variety of data available on internet so they can search any type of information on the websites. Adding on, it also provide latest information to pupils therefore they can up to date through the internet as compare with libraries in which students do not able to access new information as it need some time to upgrade da system.
On the fence side, of the reasons why other opposing this pioneer one is that, libraries provide ambience environment which help student to concentrate on their study. To explicate, it is suitable place for learners, no one can distract them as all the student are intrested in their study so they do nat have time to disturb someone. Another o e fact is that libraries are mainly based on academics so there is no any other type of distraction such as, in the case of online there is various type of things show on screen while learning which distract pupils from study.
To conclude, no doubt internet service proved beneficial for students as a source of study but it also has some pros, that’s why, libraries are good way for them if they want to learn things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ndividuals claim that internet provides a best source of information so, there is...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... more need of libraries. I am partially agree with the aforementioned statement and w...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to pay'?
Suggestion: to pay
...out their subjects and they do not need pay for it as this is unpaid facility. Ther...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ion on the websites. Adding on, it also provide latest information to pupils therefore ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the latest'.
Suggestion: provide the latest
...ion on the websites. Adding on, it also provide latest information to pupils therefore they ca...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e mainly based on academics so there is no any other type of distraction such as, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, no doubt, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77160493827 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67889144632 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6335180957 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.545454545 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234405919183 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086438850524 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535720569913 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130449747625 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421763695188 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.