Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary.
Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of e-books and libraries which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claimimg that it is beneficial while others reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impacts in recent years. In my opiniom the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will furthrt elaborate my views for favouring merits of these trends and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
After analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and the formost reason behind this is that it is true that, the Internet is a treasure of data and info in all the fields and It is having their own advantages. Firstly, any data on any subject can be attained in fraction of seconds at round the clock; while libraries are working only for a few hours in a day. Another striking benefit in this regard Is that it provides mobility, the material getting updated at every second and one can get updated records in a minimal time. categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main Reason behitnd this is that they provide comfort to get information without going to the particular place and it is the boon to the busy people.For instance, students can alsoacquire details of the ongoing research on a specific topic.
Probing ahead one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that the libraries have their own importance. First of all, in terms of the ambience. Moving further it is pertinent to mention that The libraries have a quiet environment with less distractions, which helps to study with full of concentration. For example, During examination, 30% of students are preferring to study in college or school libraries.Moreover anybody can update the blog or material on the Internet and thusthere are no granted research papers available to find records of the experiments. Apart from the freason mentioned Above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of libraries.
To recapitulate,according to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the internet is a great source of information with accessibility and mobility, the library has its own advantages suchas ambience, quite environment and proof of correct data with the name of the author.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08947368421 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02969948136 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2157058139 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111623798449 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350502313658 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317086007595 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684794038822 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032212206298 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...eficial while others reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has...
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...aborate my views for favouring merits of these trends and thus will lead to a log...
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...hus will lead to a logical conclusion. After analyzing the statement and explai...
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...e and it is the boon to the busy people.For instance, students can alsoacquire deta...
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... ongoing research on a specific topic. Probing ahead one of the main underlying...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun distractions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...libraries have a quiet environment with less distractions, which helps to study with...
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...le, During examination, 30% of students are preferring to study in college or school libraries...
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...to study in college or school libraries.Moreover anybody can update the blog or material...
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...to study in college or school libraries.Moreover anybody can update the blog or material...
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...favour of libraries. To recapitulate,according to the argument aforementioned above on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08947368421 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02969948136 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2157058139 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111623798449 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350502313658 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317086007595 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684794038822 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032212206298 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.