There have been opinions that stress the importance of teenagers’ contribution to the society. I strongly agree that by offering free community service, the youth can not only be of assistance for their community, but also enjoy a chance for personal development.
Firstly, it is evident that the community can benefit from the youthful workforce. If youngsters could put aside a small portion of their leisure time to help with social tasks such as cleaning the streets and taking care of senior citizens, the municipality would certainly be able to save an enormous amount of expenses, thus reducing the burden on the national budget in social sector in the long run. Additionally, involving adolescents in these social activities seems like a sensible method to enhance understanding and strengthen the bond among members of the community, especially between the young and the elderly, whose generation gap is severely wide.
The personal gains for each individual teenager are also worth mentioning. Through unpaid social work, the youth can acquire practical knowledge which is often not available in the usual classroom settings. Instead of spending hours reading about moral education in textbooks, it would be more beneficial if students could actually participate in useful social activities and make their own evaluation of their progress. This process, certainly, can facilitate the augmentation of the children’s interpersonal skills such as team work, problem-solving and so on.
In sum, the social and personal merits of encouraging voluntary activities for teenagers are undeniable. Teenagers are strongly advised to be more active in this field of work, as this will clearly be of great value to both the society and the youth themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98184922379 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8798443756 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21827635275 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813102142106 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477948735063 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134787380859 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363252413169 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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