Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While many people think that for the bright future career, students should focus on learning all subjects in school, others believe that they should concentrate on the subject that they keen on and love to study it. I agree with the latter viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is essential for youngsters to learn by heart all school subjects. In the modern-day, knowing a basic knowledge about everything not only impressed people, but also helpful in daily life. History provides a good example for this. Many students nowadays have a preconceive notion that history is such a boring subject and does not supply practical application for their life, so they tend to ignore the lesson in this subject. But they do not understand that history brings a lot of meaning which very useful in life such as people have to appreciate the effort that the generation before had put to protect their freedom country, or understand how important the peace is, and so on. Moreover, many conversation, with other people is related to subject, the knowledge about things that we have learned. Therefore, if we had normal understanding about many fields in life, we would easily impress others, so that people can make friend comfortably.
On the other hand, learning the subject that teenage are master or they are interested in brings a lot of benefits. Most of people will have at least a talent in some subject since they were born, and bad at other subject. Mathematics is a perfect exemplifies for this principle. Many youngsters find struggle in doing math, but some have a wonderful calculated brain that easy for them to answer math's questions, so they will do better work in that subject than others. This means that in the future, when teenagers have to choose their job, for not wasting their time, they should choose job that they are best at and attracted them most. Therefore, not only they will take some achievement in that field, but also never lose the motivation to work. For that reason, students should concentrate to study hard on subject that they are talented and interested most.
In conclusion, while many people think that studying all the subject in school will provide necessary information for their future, i believe that the subject that youngsters mastered and fond of most need to be focus on more than others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e for this. Many students nowadays have a preconceive notion that history is such a boring su...
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Line 2, column 714, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conversation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conversations'.
Suggestion: many conversations
...tant the peace is, and so on. Moreover, many conversation, with other people is related to subjec...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...interested in brings a lot of benefits. Most of people will have at least a talent in some sub...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... wasting their time, they should choose job that they are best at and attracted the...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...necessary information for their future, i believe that the subject that youngster...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52657919696 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502525252525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1908378807 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.823529412 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371909968676 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121777655588 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117493685912 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25654211821 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113345435537 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.