It is considered by many that the every crime should be punish regardless of criminal’s situations while the others believe that maybe there are some reasons for criminality and whole conditions should be consider before criminal sentence. I agree with the second group because every person should be put on trials and has rights for defencing.
On the one hand, if a person is criminal and do bad things, it is a crime at the end of the day without considering any behind story of incident. No one could be sure of criminals’ regrets, they must suffer the consequences and after the punishment, they could continue to life without any remose. Type of crime is not a parameter for avoidence of punishment because it is a harmful thing and it was written in the law books. Also, lawbreakers have always the chance not to do crime but they prefer to commit an offense.
On the other hand, people live in several kind of lives in the world and we cannot know the every person’s life story and what brings their into these situation. I think, backgrounds of events is pretty crucial for deciding on the punishment because the punish is effect a person’s whole life and future. In my opinion, right of defence is main rule of justice even though it is going to be end up with life imprisonment. In addition, i think, judges should consider about a person’s raising conditions and his/her obligations for live on such as family or children and salary of work.
In conclusion, many people think that a criminal should be punish without arguing about the type of crime and punishment should be fixed. Others and I believe that there should be consider the motivation of crime for deciding on punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'punished'?
Suggestion: punished
... by many that the every crime should be punish regardless of criminal’s situations whi...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...minality and whole conditions should be consider before criminal sentence. I agree with ...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...e. On the other hand, people live in several kind of lives in the world and we cannot kno...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...s life story and what brings their into these situation. I think, backgrounds of events is pret...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... for deciding on the punishment because the punish is effect a person’s whole life and fut...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...up with life imprisonment. In addition, i think, judges should consider about a p...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mily or children and salary of work. In conclusion, many people think that a cr...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'punished'?
Suggestion: punished
... people think that a criminal should be punish without arguing about the type of crime...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...hers and I believe that there should be consider the motivation of crime for deciding on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78114478114 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6754819774 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8207578219 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394496043367 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15931365465 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131794276144 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278453446036 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153023177636 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.