In my country, Thailand. We have highest punishments as an execution when people judged as a serious charge for example, criminal, narcotic charge and sexual assault. My opinion is, these charges are desperate but sometime there has been a possibility that innocent people may be charged by these allegations and they were executed without any guilty.
Firstly, I still believe on punishment by judge but when we take someone life, there were many misjudgments happened by court. Surely, we cannot call that life back again. Reducing highest penalty to be sentence in jail is necessary in our society. When the truth reveals and they are not guilty, those prisoners will have a second chance to come back to their life again. Highest charge as prison will prevent misjudgments but not completely.
Secondly, if I killed someone and we think of it as a self-defense. As well, court decided that I am guilty. The sentence should be listening and mitigate because it happens not because of intention. The kill was not because needs of any kind of assets or hates. However, there should have enough supporting evidences before getting mitigate otherwise criminal will use this point for committed crime more easily.
However, serious punishments for crime are still important in our society no matter what I said earlier. It is to prevent and protect our children life that they are living in a safe society. We have studied a lot from the history without those punishments people cannot stay in peace. And killing will happen everywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
In my country, Thailand. We have highest punishments as an execution when people...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Reducing the highest'.
Suggestion: Reducing the highest
...y, we cannot call that life back again. Reducing highest penalty to be sentence in jail is neces...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Highest'.
Suggestion: The Highest
...hance to come back to their life again. Highest charge as prison will prevent misjudgme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06274509804 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62714660221 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0702331396 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9411764706 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185787581707 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048984141448 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553435347093 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108826594466 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360816289522 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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