So, I think when deciding on punishment for crime, court should be circumstansec of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it. I think that the motives and circumstances of the commission of crimes are so diverse that they cannot be judged equally by patterns. At the same time, I do not mean flexible types of punishments, the punishment for the same type of crime can be the same, but the circumstances and motive of the crime must be taken into account when passing a sentence. For example, circumstances can be mitigating or, conversely, aggravating. A crime can be committed by negligence, or it can to be self-defense, also on the contrary, the crime can be intentional and for a certain purpose. When deciding the punishment, this is very important. So, job of courts very complicated, how competent a judge should be in order to determine punishments.
But judges no always decide. Still, had jury is a group.
A jury is a group of people who, during a trial, recognizes certain facts as established and makes a decision on the guilt of the defendant. Today, the jury trial is the most common in the United States: there are more than 120 thousand trials with its participation every year (almost 90% of all such trials in the world). In the United States, any civil or criminal case may be tried in a jury if the defendant or plaintiff so wishes. Moreover, according to a decision of the US Supreme Court in 1968, if the defendant faces imprisonment for more than six months, then the trial in a jury is the constitutional right of the accused.
One of the most scandal case: 1997, USA. The jury, who tried the case on charges of Iris Pine in the murder of her own husband, issued a verdict of "innocent", despite exhaustive evidence of her guilt. The jury, consisting mostly of women, considered that Mrs. Pine had no other way to free herself from the tyranny of her husband. Think, you would agree with this verdict? I agree, if it was the only chance to stay alive. And even this is one of the unique case when a woman could be justified.
Or other case (not real case, I saw this case in movie about lawyers) - lawyer without special law diploma (without law degree) is recognized as a lawyer? Note: prosecutor accuses him of fraud. Moreover, this lawyer successfully practices and protects the rights of people, he love law and knows the law better than lawyers! And the jury before the decision saw more than three cases of legal protection from grateful people. Would you blame a person who can and wants to protect people? You think? Note: jury issued a verdict of "innocent", with which I completely agree.
My opinion, actually in different crime's cases should be learn different sides and then decide of punishment, because our life full of different peoples, who had bad or good intentions. And we should very carefully analyze good intentions from bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for example, i think, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 505.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76633663366 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91275721131 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0798408886 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1481481481 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7037037037 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309479108135 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725788504549 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119265400943 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120723115691 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169468805243 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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