Levying of taxes by the government has always become a burden for citizens because they considered that it reduces their incomes. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea though there might be few advantages without paying taxes.
Some people who are against paying taxes might hold the following several reasons. First, the income taxes bring difficulty for people to accumulate fortune when people are supposed to hand some of there salaries to the government, this might reduce the passion of making money and creation, which does harm to the social economy. Furthermore, the government sometimes uses taxes to make some unwise investments that have no functions on citizens’ lives improvement and well-being increase.
However, taxes bring more advantages than shortcomings as to many aspects of our social lives. Above all, a large proportion of our taxes go to government revenue, which are used for the improvement of public affairs, such as education, medicine, road maintenance and garbage collection, sewer systems, etc. This part of taxes acts as the fuels of the society's operation, without which we may not live a happy life. Furthermore, due to the income gap of different hierarchy, the richer you are, the more taxes you should pay, the government uses the taxes to relieve the poor people and help reduce the gap between the rich and the poor. Besides, some national affairs which may not have a direct influence on us, such as technology and national defence, are extremely crucial for us to live peacefully and harmoniously.
Therefore, though paying taxes may have some weakness in our income increment, it is a vital compulsion for every citizen of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17518248175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72175677347 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.232435173 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203087090583 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751964845675 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424732572395 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11939541377 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280043630386 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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