In contemporary epoch, money has been playing most significant role for mankind. It is argued by some people that whether money, which is earned by people, ought to be kept themselves or taxes should not be fulfilled to government by folks. I am pro as much as anti with the given statement, and would discuss in the fourthcoming paragraphs with the conclusion at last.
To embark, the earned money should be kept to themselves instead of paying taxes to government that is beneficial or deprived people, since penniless people do not have ample money by which their children can take admission in the school or the college. Apart from that, because of lacking of money, people cannot purchase rudimentary needs of their family. Hence, if people do not pay taxes, needy people can fulfil the basic needs of their kin. Therefore, it is fruitful for people who do not have money to live tremendous life. Moreover, due to politics, unemployment can increase daybyday. For instance, in spite of paying taxes, spectacular job cannot be offered to people in order to do job in government department, since all money, which is allocated for not only government building but also wages of employment, has been corrupted for himself or herself. Hence, people are tempting towards the crime. Besides, people have been doing riot as well as violence in the commuting. It is extremely hazardous for humankind.
However, paying taxes to bureaucrat are advantages for making marvellous better society along with nation. To illustrate, nowadays, owing to lacking of money, any tempting facilities cannot be yielded by the government. Thus, if people are giving a adequate taxes, people can get an abundous facilities like not only government school but also hospital so that destitute children can take admission free of cost in the school. Consequently, because of that, educated society can be created. It is good for individuals. In addition, government
can do research on medical field regarding medicine which is one of the most crucial parts of life. For example, nowadays, cancer is one of the most jeopardy diseases. Several people suffer from this kind of malady. As a result, people are demise. Thus, if people are paying taxes, medical research department can be established by the government. So that scientist can do research whereby one can find the ample medicine for people who have been suffering from cancer; many people can save their life. Besides, people can live away from this disease and live life in king size with their kin. Paying taxes is good for individuals and country.
To sum up, I personally aver that although, propel, who are born with silver spoon, taxes ought to be fulfilled to government, for it is good for society or nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: tax; taxis
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...equate taxes, people can get an abundous facilities like not only government scho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2305.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0327510917 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68466363136 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46943231441 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.9240643142 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6538461538 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203003017663 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626229335425 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610020887431 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113037920172 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743643342988 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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