Children are successors of the society without whom the future would be doom and gloom. Providing a comprehensive educational system is a pivotal duty for any government, accounting for it could create a conducive condition for thriving of little ones. That is to say, it has to provide both mental and spiritual empowerment. By and large, I am of the conviction that students need to be provided by mandatory unprofitable social activities, especially owing to human inner beauty and national cohesiveness improvement.
One of the key factors of a humanity aspect developing by any dissent intellectual biped could be selflessness. This is nothing to do with nature of human, conversely, it is all about nurturing it during youngster period obtained through elevated education apparatus. This vary quality surely is the root of future well-formed character. I recently have read an article in a civics journal, mentioning about the high level of correlation coefficient between charity jobs obligated by school and future healthy behavior of the member of the society.
Devoting yourself to other people in young ages albeit mandatory, galvanize inter-national empathy due to repetitive practice of modesty in life. This sophisticated attitude undoubtedly will led to a crime-less society, because the more members of a community develop moral aspects, the more negative scenes, that are the source of conflict among terrestrial beings, will diminish. My experience is a good case in point, I have studied in a school with strict rules for unpaid and charity choirs, we have to gather rubbishes on the neighbor street every weekends. Honestly, it was a nightmare for every and each of students, however, by the time, we became aware of municipal sweepers hardness and always treat them with respect despite becoming a lawyer in my adulthood. this example clearly illustrates the importance of free volunteer jobs in the prosperity of a nation.
In conclusion, it seems to me that, transcendence and national integrity are two inevitable beauty of pay-less social responsibilities would be place in an educational mechanism. Although, this mandatory jobs without any payment looks curial in first sight, it turns out they are crucial for the future of the young generations. As a result, sight must not be lost that there are more to teaching a young good behavior than meets the eye. Teacher have to pay attention to use this methods in a moderate fashion, otherwise, it can do more harm than good.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months.• Say how 78
- You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine In your lettercorrect the information in the articleexplain why it is import 89
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lead
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Suggestion: sweepers'; sweeper's
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Suggestion: This
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Consider replacing "in a moderate fashion" with adverb for "moderate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, honestly, however, if, look, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, by and large, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21091811414 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03147821497 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1933548273 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.529411765 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127948235895 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353789967658 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284850958527 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728410431379 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230163222056 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.