Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that free community service should have a compulsory in the high school curriculum. I completely disagree with this view because pupils should try to help voluntary people who need help.
On the one hand, i accept that helping other people is important for students. Because it affect positively their behavior and personality that would lead future's success life. However, it must be optional to support impoverished life and teach something which means forcing is not right. In addition to if children favor to people optional, they to be able to help sincerely. In most communities there are people who deprive money , need to help and want to study something. Therefore, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating food, money, clothes to teach anything such as English, sports. In order to participate as many people a possible, teachers should organize event that appreciate their contribution.
At the same time, i believe that people have obligation to aid human. Because all people would live in the one world that is our mother nature. Thus, to understand is elemental that children can improve people who require a help by working volunteer. For instance, It is often easy for development country's children since they can teach English that can be able to lead perspective better life for less developing countries children.
In conclusion, it is true that pupils cannot help every people and i believe that it is right thing that students help to people, but helping have to absolutely freely and voluntary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06274509804 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66846627865 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6297365983 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235889119636 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082895180764 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652706371705 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145565726777 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690641603518 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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