Charity works can be commonly seen in many parts of the world especially in European countries. Some people think that free community services have to be included as a part of high school curriculum subject. I strongly agree with this view due to some reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
The first and foremost benefit is that sports activity can extremely improve the physical fitness of both young and high school students at campus itself. This is because physical health is the key to happiness and also it is an indispensable part of human being. This can be done with the help of senior students. If high school students can deal this programme effectively, both of them can maintain their body fit enough and consequently they can live without any health ailments such as obesity, heart issues and so on. Therefore, it is clear that many diseases easily can be tackled through this volunteer work at school.
Another key point is that children able to get an opportunity to learn about the society with the help of their elder students. In fact, this kind of initiatives will keep the bonding between students and their community. When students are engaged with such work , it is quite easy to address many social problems and do some awernes programmes against pollution, communicable diseases, street war and so on. Moreover, yonger students can adopt new ideas and massive technics and also can implement this with the help of high school pupils. Thus, socialization can improve between people in the society at early and which will develop a real citizen because of close understanding.
In conclusion, if do some free community services at school time, it will not only help to develop neighbourhood in many ways but also physical fitness in children at an early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95379537954 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61131797406 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7626920706 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178721674014 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704586200484 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571177350559 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131356825397 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505509454979 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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