Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to some people, school authority should make voluntary work a part of their high school education. I strongly agree with the statement and believe that this will enable students to learn different skills and helping deprived people.
To start with, We cannot ignore the fact that, no skill is wasteful. By doing different types of compulsory work like cooking, giving sports training will help them develop that particular skill which can be useful in the future. For instance, if anyone wants to help someone repair their fence then they need to learn how to repair it, so this will force them to acquire that skill in the first place.
On top of that, there are some remote areas where government service does not reach. Such as Island of Saint-Martin in The Bay of Bengal, where it is hard for the government to reach because of it's remote location from the mainland. Especially an area like this tend to depend on voluntary services like. If we ignore the charity work, then all of a sudden these places will become unlivable. By not encouraging voluntary work the result in these areas can be catastrophic.
Furthermore, every country does not possess an equal amount of wealth. Even there are countries who are unable to maintain it's people. In fact, some people do not receive any benefit from the government. Voluntary work in that particular area can be extremely helpful. To illustrate, a country like Somalia, where helping elderly people to find work or providing free medical service is essential.
Doing voluntary work at high school is invaluable to society, and to the individual. I would reiterate that this should be practised all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...of their lives. For instance, if anyone want to help someone repair their fence then...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ke basic healthcare or repairing homes. If we ignore the charity work then all of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, to start with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91986062718 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46346145272 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9237065382 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204578913222 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625333898817 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494569087899 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11576383895 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371723490968 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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