It is a fact that riding a bicycle is good for our health because it is an environment-friendly mode of transportation. Some individuals opine that bicycle is the best way to reduce pollution and obesity while others disagree with this notion. I will explain both pros and cons of bicycle as well as my opinion in the forthcoming paragraph.
There are multifarious benefits of bicycle. To begin with, bicycles put more contribution to make the dirt-free environment and also lessen the problem of traffic congestion as compare to cars which produces highly toxic pollutants in nature which are detrimental to the health of individuals. For exemplify, a study by the world wildlife fund in 2015 revealed that if most people choose to ride a bike while going to work, this could decrease air pollutants by almost 50%.
Moreover, bicycles are the best mode of transportation to remain physically fit to control the overweighting obstacle of human beings. Amazingly, the average person will burn 450 to 750 calories per hour cycling. Furthermore, bicycles are cheap and sustainable form of transportation and there is no formality required as cars. In addition, it saves cost on maintenance and on fuel which is also responsible for deplete the world resources.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of bicycles. Firstly, bicycles are not much beneficial in emergency situations such as heavy rain or in bad weather conditions. Secondly, there is more physical efforts required for bicycling and is not suitable for senior citizens. Thirdly, bicycles are unable to travelling long distances because of less comfortable and lower speed.
According to my perception, there is some disadvantages of bicycles but the advantages can not be ignore. We can use bicycle to stay fit and more healthy. Bicycle should be used to go near places. It will help to live longer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are some disadvantages
... speed. According to my perception, there is some disadvantages of bicycles but the advantages can not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08262623035 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6722816543 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166482419529 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514563670342 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417432794521 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090712468443 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374680718865 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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