Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behavior.
What is your opinion?
It is argued by many that violent content on television and in computer games has harmful implications on people’s behavior while the opponents of this view opine that TV programs and computer games which have violent images do not affect how people behave. In my opinion, the first point of view seems more viable.
One the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that views or gamers are not negatively influenced by what they watch on TV or play. Their explanation is that adults are mature and have ability to differentiate between wright and wrong. Therefore, they do not behave aggressively just because of watching a films containing violent scenes, for example. However, this thinking is not always true as the main audience of TV or players of computer games are children and teenagers. These people are vulnerable to violent content on TV and games.
Children are immature and they are in the process of growing up, so they tend to imitate what they watch and hear. Being exposed to such inappropriate programs on TV or spending time on computer games may lead to violent behaviors or affect their ability to know the reality and virtuality. For instance, it is likely that a little boy watching a movie in which a hero fights against his enemies acts as if he was a hero and copied the actions. This sometimes causes injuries for the boy himself and other people. Likewise, teenagers can be badly influenced when spending excessive time playing games. Those playing games containing violent images or content tend to get angry easily and lose control in terms of emotion and action.
In conclusion, while adults may not be affected by what is on TV or computer games, violent content on these social media platforms can affect children and teenagers’ behavior sooner or later.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst point of view seems more viable. One the one hand, it is understandable w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een wright and wrong. Therefore, they do not behave aggressively just because of ...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a film' or simply 'films'?
Suggestion: a film; films
...e aggressively just because of watching a films containing violent scenes, for example....
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to violent content on TV and games. Children are immature and they are in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63598911885 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5619515427 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201524011604 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653010358056 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617802064964 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133901942446 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588172413258 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst point of view seems more viable. One the one hand, it is understandable w...
^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een wright and wrong. Therefore, they do not behave aggressively just because of ...
^^
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a film' or simply 'films'?
Suggestion: a film; films
...e aggressively just because of watching a films containing violent scenes, for example....
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to violent content on TV and games. Children are immature and they are in th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63598911885 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5619515427 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201524011604 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653010358056 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617802064964 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133901942446 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588172413258 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.