Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Firstly, the purpose of tourism industry in all the world is to close people with different cultures more and more together and try to remove what that makes them to feel discrimination. If a visitor does not follow his or her host people customs, it can be had negative effects on people’s behavior and they may feel more difference between themselves and other country. For example, some customs reference to religion and if a tourist with a different religion does not respect them, host people think that the tourist dose not respect their religion and resulting more serious problems.
Secondly, making a tourist familiar with cultures and customs of a country is so far easier than making large groups of people familiar with different cultures of visitors. However, it is needed for governments, especially those who want to attract more and more tourist, to teach their people how to response when they see actions by visitors which are different with their customs and encourage them to avoid from violent responses.
In overall, I believe that it would be better and more efficient if tourists try to follow local customs and believes. However, people in countries, with high potential to attract tourist, should learn how to response difference in cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11483253589 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65968462422 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7751896559 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.714285714 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168268585633 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839167871917 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328431123821 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118410117676 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014030856008 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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