Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... up physical and mind and it can delete some of the sad memory. The first reason for c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 390, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...they cannot avoid changing if they live if the world that there are changing many ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44383561644 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20697813455 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452054794521 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3034970691 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4117647059 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354612402954 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0144211644975 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01715955264 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0194909483754 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159156823622 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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