Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

Submitted by minhhh on Thu, 07/14/2022 - 05:08

The problem of recycling need to be fix carefully and governments have responsibility and need to make some law for that issue, everyone know that waste make enviroment polluted, so it is a factor can reduce our health, for example chineses and japan's resident have the different health and that depent by their food and the environment in the place they live, after the harm and example for the important of fixing recycle problem so i think we need to increse reclycle waste for our economy and reduce polluted in this way.In the other hand, many people never throw trash into the bin, they used to throw them on the street and that is big mistake. if we have legal requirements we can have enough of waste from home have been recycle, people will scared the law because they can be accuse by someone. Of curse, our country insuffisant people to manage so we can tell everyone to pick up trash and throw into bin or sorting bin if them see, we can see that law are very important to make people good implementation of the rules and government need to rigid for that rule and the penalty can be money, by this way we can help environment and protect our health.I think this problem need to be look carefully and have solution timely to help our life, if we can do that we will suffer the impact of environment and we can't only tell people to make the action i was tell, we need law by governments so let's help thí enviroment more fresh and don't have polluted

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... important of fixing recycle problem so i think we need to increse reclycle waste...
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Line 1, column 526, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...economy and reduce polluted in this way.In the other hand, many people never throw...
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Line 1, column 652, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... on the street and that is big mistake. if we have legal requirements we can have ...
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Line 1, column 751, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'scare'
Suggestion: scare
...rom home have been recycle, people will scared the law because they can be accuse by s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...help environment and protect our health.I think this problem need to be look care...
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Line 1, column 1319, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...suffer the impact of environment and we cant only tell people to make the action i w...
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Line 1, column 1360, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ant only tell people to make the action i was tell, we need law by governments so...
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Line 1, column 1366, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...ly tell people to make the action i was tell, we need law by governments so lets hel...
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Line 1, column 1402, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...was tell, we need law by governments so lets help thí enviroment more fresh and dont...
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Line 1, column 1442, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lets help thí enviroment more fresh and dont have polluted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4312267658 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37863608975 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494423791822 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 20.2975951904 438% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 236.186367092 49.4020404114 478% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.333333333 106.682146367 372% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.6666666667 20.7667163134 432% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281212775074 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199807175721 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638181034541 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281212775074 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.3 13.0946893788 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.6 11.3001002004 315% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.6 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.1190380762 372% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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