Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast

recycling is the key to development in many countries.Izt is now being used for many purposes in many countries.Handful of masses consider that not much of the waste is recycled from homes.There should some strict rules to prevent this manner which I will discuss along with my opinion in the impending paragraphs

To initiate with,the foremost point Which strikes my mind is that people are not aware about how much important the waste is like there are so many gases which are produced from the waste.It is officials duty to make them aware about the responsibilities towards country.There should be dumb bins in particular areas where people can throw their waste.There should be a regular collection of waste in all areas.

According to me,I think the seminar should be held in particular areas to make people aware about the consequences of not recycled waste. People should be aware about the diseases rise with waste there should be a particular incharge of the area responsible for the checking of the waste.

to put it in a nutshell,I pen down saying that it is all upon the government how to manage the waste and how to assure people that it is beneficial for them.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as to, i think, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86633663366 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82796352665 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 251.249875622 49.4020404114 509% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.75 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.5 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208891477544 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13961540906 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278326619027 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133257661519 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138144897643 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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