Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Cars – one of the most essential inventions in human history. These machines have accelerated the process of human civilization evolution as well as the invention has brought a plenty of drawbacks, particularly in the form of ecological issues. Nevertheless, I believe advantages of owning a car overwhelms its disadvantages.
Having a car has resulted in increased level of air pollution around the world. World’s biggest metropolises such as New York, Beijing, Tokyo, etc. are choking with the fumes emitted from cars, according to WHO (World Health Organization). Also, cars are responsible for relatively high temperature in large cities, where the density of cars is the highest. A small crossover, for instance, can heat up the air around itself to 50 Celsius degree within an hour in a traffic jam. Therefore, it can appear that having a car contributes in contaminating the environment; however, some solutions are being undertaken to resolve the issue.
Companies such as Tesla and Toyota are focusing on electric car production, which is significantly environmental friendly than conventional cars. Cars have made travelling more enjoyable and cost-effective; it is also predicted that electric cars will be more cost-effective since it is cheaper to produce electricity than extracting oil. Moreover cars reduced time spent on commuting until they have become affordable for most individuals resulting in intense traffic jams; nonetheless, most city authorities construct highways to increase traffic capacity.
Cars have alleviated burden of travelling making our journeys safer, faster and more enjoyable. Nevertheless, the machines have already made significant harm to the environment, so it is crucial to upgrade cars by adjusting them more environmental friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28554426197 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9755996655 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258248502302 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899758277517 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612402832766 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154995767018 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199760178339 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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