Health care is one of the most important problems that arouses many people considerations and concerns. It is believed that in several Western countries, people are eating unhealthily with junk foods, overusing alcoholic drinks or pre-packed food, etc and critics advice that they should alter their diet. As far as I am concerned, I have a strong opinion on the fact that these countries should develop healthier habits rather than harmful ones.
It cannot be denied that the numbers of obesities patients have increased dramatically in recent years and most patients are children or young adults. This is the consequence of overusing junk food and soft drinks like fried chicken, pizza or coke. They usually avoid eating healthy food such as fruits or green vegetables which provide a wide range of nutrients and fibers. Moreover, not merely does these food leads to obesities, but also they could increase the likelihood of suffering from heart diseases, stroke, diabetes as well. Due to the fact that, the transfat including in several fast foods could lead to the growth of the amount of bad cholesterol in our blood.
Besides junk foods, Western countries are also well-known for their pre-packed and canned food consumptions. Nutritionists believe that processed food not only don't have any nutrients but also contains a lot of bad chemical substances such as preservatives or food colorings. Consuming these substances will increase the risk of suffering from several types of cancers, for example, digestive system cancers.
In the light of these facts, I believe that it is time for Western countries changing their eating habit and preventing these negative consequences by increasing the number of healthy food such as green vegetables and fruits in their daily meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25874125874 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71782476817 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8638491416 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197388853863 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683389986422 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743644459782 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140984045236 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972788940286 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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