Some public believe cost is key factor when purchasing goods and services. In my opinion, cost is main thing to look, however, some other merits are also we need to look.
To begin with, nowadays in many families relay on income of one member, due to that reason they predefined their budget. In addition, inflation is also plays big role to take a decision how much money do they need to spend on products and services. Secondly, in bazaar similar products are available at different cost.To take, an example, we can purchase same features of mobile at different prices, brands, and shopping platforms.
However, some people are also shopaholic and buy product according to brand, quality, and its looks. Moreover, some people always consider top-level facilities and services.To illustrate, person who has cancer is not looking money, although, he looks for cure services. Another reason is to get pleasure of services and products, some people spend money without thinking little bit. For example, The person whose income is ill-gotten gain and have lot of illegal wealth, for that type of people money does not important thing compare to their gratification. For example, politicians, Industrialists, actors, sports person. Moreover, there are some human beings exists who has ancestral property, namely, expensive jewellery and land.
To conclude, I think, there are some people exists, for them cost of goods and services is just a number. In contrary, others believe that price is main priority while consume product or get services.
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 56
- In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks.Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62580199334 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5800622316 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18825930228 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664059374676 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465602039562 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11085215626 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496601875627 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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