Some people enjoy change,while others like their lives to stay the same. Compare these two approaches to life and present your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people enjoy change,while others like their lives to stay the same. Compare these two approaches to life and present your opinion.

Everyone wants to live their life with freedom.some people want to change their routine for live their life happily. While some don't want to change. This essay will discuss why people enjoy change but why other Like live to stay the same.
Change are needed for all things in our life. People get pleasure from doing things differently in daily routine. Due to change, men gets new experience and courage to do something new, as an example every day eating a barbecue men gets bored, so they prefer to eat outside. Changing everyday routine brings new knowledge. It increases thinking power.

Some people live the same day and day in their lives because they are altered from change they doesn't want to do any new experience with life. Doing something gives a comfort level and leads to success in its own way. Old habbits gives us confidence because if we do one thing in our daily routine then it becomes absolutely easy for us and we become master in it.

Due to change men gets dare to do something new. Nothing remains the same for a long period of time. I believe that change brings new opportunities for people. because, not everybody gets it every time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir routine for live their life happily. While some dont want to change. This essay wi...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...for live their life happily. While some dont want to change. This essay will discuss...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...cause they are altered from change they doesnt want to do any new experience with life...
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Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ew. Nothing remains the same for a long period of time. I believe that change brings new oppor...
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Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ge brings new opportunities for people. because, not everybody gets it every time.
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Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ge brings new opportunities for people. because, not everybody gets it every time.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67475728155 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28568619703 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5714562693 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189678561118 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614937590889 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844855643145 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126835475268 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127767239916 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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