In bygone days, there was no media platform for advertising except newspapers. However, in the era of technology there are plethora of ways to advertising. It is common belief that consequences of advertise beneficial for personal and for trader while, other oppose for the same. It has both adverse and advantages too.
To commence with, there are numerous factors are there that support first view. Media are now the highest used platform for share any kind of information. Hence, it is the medium for accurate and real fact's provider. Secondly, people who work as a business man and merchant for them it is beneficial. For example, those who are trader and invest their money in share market are dependent on stocks and related knowledge. And this kind of advertisement only provide in media. As a result, they fetch the instruction and invest or work accordingly.
On the contrary, there are many disadvantages of that such as bad influencer and negative visual which telecast on media. Moreover, parents are busy in their hectic schedule when their juveniles are at home and spend time in watching this kind of harmful content. Subsequently, they influenced in bad way and take incorrect path or make blunder in their young age. Furthermore, there are a number of visuals are shown in advertisement which lure people and then people insist for the same product that attract them.
In conclusion, above said both reasons are relevant and valid. However, I thought logically then I strongly agree that it is a positive. Consequently, we can ignore the negative side. It is suggested that, children should watch this kind of sources under their parent's supervision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facts'' or 'fact's'?
Suggestion: facts'; fact's
... it is the medium for accurate and real facts provider. Secondly, people who work as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07608695652 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78499246853 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7557620212 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7368421053 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57894736842 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19519484448 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523683867019 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047440008554 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111415210968 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405595304178 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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