Some people feel that the responsibility for providing education should be borne only by the government and that private education should be banned What is the main advantage of banning private education Are there any circumstances where private education

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Some people feel that the responsibility for providing education should be borne only by the government and that private education should be banned.
What is the main advantage of banning private education?
Are there any circumstances where private education be allowed?
What is your own opinion on the matter?

Many people believe that the education is the one of the important things in their lives. They cannot perform many things, such as working in a high educated company or computing with a high technology appliance. Nowadays, some people feel that the responsibility for providing education should be banned. I will explain many things about government education and private education.

As we know, private education is developing higher in the number of the school and the quality. It tends to compete and beat the education from government so that, many people will choose private education better t...

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private education is developing higher in the number of the school and the quality
Description: can you re-write this sentence?

private education usually independent
private education is usually independent

Sentence: Second, when the government is abandon its education.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and abandon

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