Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Over the last few decades, there has been a significant shift in the way people live, with greater cultural integration in society. Although the ancestor's tradition caters as a forerunner to the prosperity of subsequent generations, some claim that pursuing an individualized lifestyle would be appropriate with the modern world throughout time.
To begin, it is unavoidable that conventional rules comprise massive moral teachings acquired and constructed by the ancestors. These cultural values reflect and shape lives, wisdom, and aspirations, stimulating the growth of descendants within the constraints of the offered framework. In almost all eastern countries, including Vietnam, teenagers are taught ethical habits such as civility, interitty, compassion in words and actions, and even respect in their formative years. Furthermore, traditional customs signify each country's cultural uniqueness, which must be protected. As a result, the younger generation should assume responsibility for passing down and preserving traditional cultures in their own countries.
Nonetheless, numerous traditional customs have been forgotten in today's world of open-minded people. One explanation for this is that governments, particularly in Western countries, tend to elevate both individualism and self-esteem, resulting in well-rounded growth of children. This means that, with the exception of old-fashioned ideals, people can cultivate a sense of independence and individuality. For example, while some people think that having tattoos makes them appear hostile, others argue that putting tattoos on their body helps them express a unique identity and acts as a powerful admonition to conquer difficult conditions. Therefore, individual thinking and action play a critical role in contributing to the long-term development of society.
In conclusion, while young people who follow ancient rituals can learn many valuable lessons from their forefathers, I think that lives based on freedom and flexibility will provide superior long run answers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99317406143 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19956723419 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706484641638 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6891927384 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.076923077 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208479787192 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558780124934 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414213038528 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109616770645 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200381583601 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.76 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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