Hobbies are necessity of humans life. Personal obsession play an important role. people can get a lot of advantages from hobbies. This is because, leisure activities are better source to utilise time in a fruitful manner. Moreover, hobbies Can help someone to make their life better. However, people believe that leisure activities are senseless.
To commence with, personal obsession is necessary to pass time. Having interest in a particular field or skill can provide more expertness to people. For example, my cousin had great passion in playing football. He always used to spend his spare time to grab more knowledge and to be perfect in football. As a result, now he is a best footballer in his school and he also plays at state level. He is interested in setting his profession in this field. In addition, fads are good source to get relaxation. Most of the people do leisure activities to relax their mind. Hobbies are known as stress buster, because whenever people feel bore then, they prefer to pursue personal obsession. Pastime can make mind more sharp and creative. Having interest in art and craft helps to get more creativity.
To continue with, personal obsession is necessary to acquire something. Due to this, sometimes, hobbies can set up a professional life and career. For example, if I have a huge interest in art and craft then in future my passion could help me to earn money. That is because, in these days, artists have great importance in society.
To sum up, hobbies can fulfill the requirements of masses. So, it is important to have fads because these help to enhance knowledge and creativity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...sonal obsession play an important role. people can get a lot of advantages from hobbie...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fruitful manner" with adverb for "fruitful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ities are better source to utilise time in a fruitful manner. Moreover, hobbies Can help someone to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ect in football. As a result, now he is a best footballer in his school and he al...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94181818182 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66775294679 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4490237148 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0869565217 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9565217391 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.78260869565 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236870623459 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663283876484 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651887417247 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14683739714 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469805805837 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...sonal obsession play an important role. people can get a lot of advantages from hobbie...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fruitful manner" with adverb for "fruitful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ities are better source to utilise time in a fruitful manner. Moreover, hobbies Can help someone to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ect in football. As a result, now he is a best footballer in his school and he al...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94181818182 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66775294679 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4490237148 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0869565217 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9565217391 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.78260869565 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236870623459 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663283876484 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651887417247 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14683739714 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469805805837 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.