Some people give the opinion that the working women do not pay
attention to bring up the children hence they should discourage from
doing job . To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays women are rubbing their shoulder with men in every work
sector and managing their child care along with it. I do not agree with
those people who think that women ought to be quite their job to look after
their children.
Women can contribute to children's nourishment in financial terms. To raise
up a child in well manner required surplus amount of money including
expenditure of healthy food and medicine particularly education which is
major part of their nourishment all these can not be afford by single men.
So working mother can add in income of house and together can raise
their children in sequester and adequate way for optimistic approach to
their life. Moreover there are many private schools, where professional
nannies take care of children. Such schools like creche and play way remain
open up till evening,therefore Women can send their baby here during their
working time without any threat and anxiety. What is more female are contributing
as a teacher, banker, doctor, leader and as a CEO of any company. Consequently
this is not only beneficial for nation's economy but also for their family stability.
On other side, nourishment of children is not cake walk, it must be done
carefully.If mother go out leaving their baby alone or in others hand may
give step motherly treatment in this such circumstances to juvenile. As a
result they may deprive of love and affection in their high time of life,
ways, they fall easy victim to anti social activities and find themselves
hopeless and helpless in over whelming questions of life.
In conclusion, though children's bringing up should be considered utmost
important but dropping job by any working women may be self defeatist.
Because they can not earn money without any job which is ultimate need
of today's parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11821086262 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63521922527 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4647044035 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171916487498 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644645042241 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056347543618 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435282926233 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039464294227 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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