Some people hold that it is the television that alienates the relationship of family members.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, television has become very popular in every household. However, it raises a concern that television is pushing the family members away from each other. Personally, I would rather agree with this idea.
Firstly, we all may see that some people are really into watching television. Take it as a typical example, one of my colleagues told me that she could stay in her room and watch Korean drama on television from day to day, even without eating sometimes. It is true that keeping the eyes on television screen in most of your free time will drive you away from the gathering moments with other members of the family.
Secondly, some people may defense that watching television together is a good way for all generations in a family to enjoy, talk and share. Nevertheless, it will not happen as far as each member of the family has his and her own favorite programmes. For instance, in family, I am always keen on horror and action movie series. Meanwhile, my younger sister is a big fan of Vietnamese pop music. Sometimes, we were not happy with each other since both wanted to see different programmes shown at the same time. As a result, the conflict is created among the family members.
To sum up, I would say that watching television has the negative impact on the relationships in the family. We can try to reduce this by adjusting the time allocated for television and spend more time gathering and communicating with other family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8023715415 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6478496583 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6261516571 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181043483686 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608476244599 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436653526137 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112044216684 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137041704751 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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