Some people prefer to live in hot climates, where as other love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that why few people love to live in hot climates and some like countries having cold environment? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that hot climatic conditions are highly suitable for living. They strengthen their view point by claiming that summer season is best for the cultivation of voluminous types of vegetables. For example, lady finger, cucumber. Therefore, people got an opportunity to taste plethora of dishes in this season. Another reason to choose hot climate is natural phenomenon rainfall is the best epitome of this. During summer season, rainfall occur in high concentration as compare to cold environment. This is due to the evaporation which takes place by increasing the temperature during hot days from natural water bodies like lake or oceans. So, it is common assertion that mostly individuals love to rain
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who reckon that cold environment is highly benefical for healthy lifestyle. To make their view convincing they claim that nodoubt, summer season is good for some reasons but, it is also well known as breeding season for mosquitoes. But, in winter people become safe from serious illness called 'malaria' which is spread by female anopheles. Moreover, massive number of bacteria grow in hot environment but, they are not able to survive in less temperature. As a result, people are able to get rid out of the situation related to bacterial infection in cold places. Therefore, people prefer to live in countries having cold climate
To sum up, weighing both the options, I personally think that there is no single conclusion still, I make this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Nodoubt, both climates hot as well as cold are best according to their characteristics. But, according to my prospective, hot environment is highly benefical due to the availability of vast variety of eatables.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to hot'
Suggestion: to hot
...n this season. Another reason to choose hot climate is natural phenomenon rainfall ...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...se of hands. Nodoubt, both climates hot as well as cold are best according to their charac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07772020725 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85357725762 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556994818653 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0964035622 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246400035937 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671999180232 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618224311191 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148041535509 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362531662559 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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