Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages of living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
shelter is one of the most neccessary requirement for human life. Fortunately, there are many types of accomodation for people to choose in order to fit with their current situation. In those ways for staying in living in a house or in an apartment is the most common trends. Here is the essay for analyzing the advantages as well as the disadvantages of these two accomodation.
On the one hand, having a house provide us a more private zone. Thus, this kind of shelter gives us more spacious for our nature hobbies. However, owning a house means you highly have a stable job because, it is not convinient to move away when carrying a bunch of interiors in your house. Futhermore, when one wants to find a new accomdation, they are ought to have have enough financial, it is just a small percentage of people who can effort a new shelter immediately so the rest of all depend on the amount of money from selling the old house, and it takes a long time to sell a house with a reasonable price.
On the other hand, renting an apartment is absolutely convinient for the people who fancy in moving and unstable working condition. Nevertheless, living in an apartment means that you have to put up with the living styles of renters around you. In addition, if you are not lucky when hiring an unsafe apartment, the rate of being broken into.
All in all, what kind of living is depends on your own decision and condition. The thing we should highly regard is enjoying our final decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Shelter
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...nd a new accomdation, they are ought to have have enough financial, it is just a small pe...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...new accomdation, they are ought to have have enough financial, it is just a small pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in addition, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59176029963 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6592815298 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0005379214 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287446455489 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934312487197 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926186950503 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157092484763 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079614580118 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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