Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
While some people love living in a nuclear family, others believe it is much better to live in an extended family. I agree with the view that people should live in a small family unit rather than a large family group.
On the one hand, there are some argue that it is essential for the youngers to live with the elderlies. they present for the old generations with traditional lifestyles, and they are a great example for us – the future generation to follow. Not just that, the elders can also help with household chores. For example, if you have a baby and you must get back to work, grandparents are a wonderful choices for babysitting and other houseworks stuff. Besides, live in an extended family also get you the opportunity to look after your parents. you can easily take care of them when they get illness, chat with them when they fell alone …
On the other hand, there are several benefits of living in an extended family. you will have a countless options of lifestyles to choose. also you will get away from your parents’ covered, which is an incredible chance for you. Although it might be really tough with a number of problems, it will turn you into an independent person, a grow up man. also, living in a small family means that the figure of family members reduces, so it will reduce the pressure of making money. Furthermore, family members can work less harder and spend more time with the family
In conclusion, I strongly agree that having a nuclear family is better than an extended family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ll turn you into an independent person, a grow up man. also, living in a small family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65313653137 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.457414975 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4683537934 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255204751896 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103165040316 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109851429175 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193878717882 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139741929139 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.