Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that the question of whether life in megacities is much more convenient than small town remains a source of vigorous debate. While many individuals choose to live in a big city, I would argue that the life in small town is highly comfortable.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people tend to settle in megacities. Firstly, there is no point in denying that there are many companies and large organisations in big city, which provide more and better job opportunities, which is seldom attain if job hunters come to live in small town or rural areas. Therefore, if people live in metropolitan, then it is more likely that they could have chances to shake off poverty and climb higher in social ladder. Furthermore, those who are inclined to settle in megacities believe that they would get access to all the excellent health care facility, which yield tangle and immidiate benefits. If, for example, city dwellers suffer from heart attack, stroke, and asthma, then they will be administered treatment in no time due to the fact that first-class hospitals and health clinics are close to there apartments.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that living in small town is much more convenient. One possible reason is that thanks to settling in small town, inhabitants themselves could get away from massively endless traffic jams, which is the headache of provincial governments. Although the transportation infrastructure in small towns is not very excellent, with the small local population, there is less severe traffic congestion, compared to that of megacities. Besides, those inhabitants could promote sense of community when they come to settle in little towns because town is smaller and less hectic than megacity. Consequently, they could foster the social solidarity easier than the city counterparts.
In conclusion, although state of the art facility and job prospects could stand the megacities in good stead, it seems to me that life in small towns would be more appealing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
It is true that the question of whether life in megacities is much more conveni...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...unterparts. In conclusion, although state of the art facility and job prospects could stand ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11178247734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81203811256 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5938189015 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191164978463 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758960260336 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069916506862 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12064492611 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473073792497 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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